Father

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I really love your attitude and passion. It's such a gift! It's obvious that you really love writing, and that's what's helping you improve, just as much as the comments. And it doesn't matter what you write about, be it personal or otherwise; a good poem is a good poem no matter what, so write about anything you want! Comments are meant only to help hone your technique, not dictate who you are as a writer and a person. That said, it's just great for us readers to see all these different dimensions of you and your writing.

Aww, I had a feeling you were tentative about commenting LOL Don't worry! Like I said there's no such thing as a wrong opinion here. Every perspective is valid and helpful. Even comments like "I like this line" or "I think this is too long" is a big help to the writer