I.C.U.

[CRNDLSM]

ICU dots in the title or no?

nobody remains good first line, intensive care, no body, nobody, body remains, lots of play here
in one room like prison it's all hustle room to room all the time
even day not an odd day
time stole loudly thru glass as time and glass always go together but the enjambs through here seem slightly off
mornings compose then 
decompose in
distances Cimmerian blue cimmerian is barbarian? Not like indigo did they have their own blue? This blue reminds me of prisons again, the walls and floors all the same tone to calm the prisoners.
where all rooms are
waiting I like this enjamb, waiting rooms waiting 
rooms my eyes
adjusting to
numbers within this
coloring bookhere at the end you seem to rush, like passing out from ICU care the room blurs into colors.  But a coloring book is mostly outlines until filled in.  I think I I can really appreciate coloring book but as is I don't fully understand its purpose.  Sonically sounds clunky in comparison to the rest.


*** Note: I apologize if the current iteration conflicts with the initial one. This was the intended version.  I think I like it, there is consistency in the confusion