Midnight Dance
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@Beardo - after reading your explanation, it makes sense. It might therefore be a good idea to make the conceit clearer in S1 eg.
'She calls me over / at the drop of midnight / her smile like a hangman's noose' etc.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe
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Midnight Dance - by Beardowulf - 01-08-2017, 06:13 AM
RE: Midnight Dance - by Achebe - 01-08-2017, 04:44 PM
RE: Midnight Dance - by Beardowulf - 01-12-2017, 10:55 AM
RE: Midnight Dance - by Rogo - 01-14-2017, 07:10 AM
RE: Midnight Dance - by Achebe - 01-14-2017, 08:31 AM
RE: Midnight Dance - by CRNDLSM - 01-15-2017, 07:52 AM
RE: Midnight Dance - by Lizzie - 01-15-2017, 10:25 AM
RE: Midnight Dance - by Erthona - 01-16-2017, 09:46 AM
RE: Midnight Dance - by voodoochild - 01-17-2017, 08:37 AM



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