01-13-2017, 10:31 AM
I agree with you @hesawacko.
Although I have hardly any experience in poetry I feel like I learn quite a bit from your reply alone. Thanks!
At first I thought it would be a bad idea to leave the third line. Not really argumented in my mind, just thought it. However, after reading it again I think it might just make this poem a bit more exciting.
All in all I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for posting @coquette16 !
Although I have hardly any experience in poetry I feel like I learn quite a bit from your reply alone. Thanks!
At first I thought it would be a bad idea to leave the third line. Not really argumented in my mind, just thought it. However, after reading it again I think it might just make this poem a bit more exciting.
All in all I enjoyed reading this poem. Thanks for posting @coquette16 !