One Solution

[hesawacko]

Hi, I like the sentiment.  I think its going in the right direction, but i feel like it needs some bigger words - more profound, maybe even razor sharp kind of punchiness.  My biggest thing is that I would not have the 3rd line (with "solution").  That way you could build to the idea of "solution" at the very end.  More notes below.

One Solution 



Consider the illusion   "illusion" makes it feel like we can't make a difference... maybe its the opposite "possibility"?
that we could make a difference
by offering one solution.  could cut this line
there would be no testing or trial runs,  maybe you don't need "there would be"
we would just do our best—
we would stick to our guns.
The world would flow nicely,
like a well-oiled machine.  maybe combine 2 lines "the world would flow like well oiled machine"?
There would be no sounds of dissension,  again maybe no "there would be"
we would all pay attention.  is there way to word this without "we would"?  almost "a world at attention"?
Simply
because
we offered the world
one solution.

sorry, that's kinda a lot of notes.  but i like where its going.  offering the world solutions is a noble sentiment!