Freedom to Love (a wedding poem)

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I cringe to think of sappy love poems, but weddings are the place for them

**Thanks in advance for reading my poem. This is to read out at a wedding in a couple of weeks. I have not written in years so constructive feedback very welcome!**

Today is a perfect day
When two hearts intertwine as they may
Tis’ the beginning of an everlasting journey I think tis is outdated
And the freedom of love shines its beauty who's beauty, the beginning, the freedom, journey, love, or it is beauty...

Standing in glorious oneness
Oh, thank the Lord for his greatness people will love this interjection 
For bringing perfect souls down a painted path
From creating life through to the aftermath aftermath reminds me of war and devastation maybe you don't need to rhyme

Unravelling every layer of the rose to the warmth of the sun like this imagery
Caressing every cell, infusing with protection and serenity 
Fresh dew touching the petals without fear of vulnerabilitylost me here, dew feeling  vulnerable 
It is time to just be I don't care for this enjambment, 'time to just be' is weak on its own

Swirling through every colour of the rainbow but works well with this sentence as generic as rainbows are.  Perfect for a wedding.
Drifting through clouds, being carried with godly hands down a waterfall nice 
Moments without hope for more than what they already arethis line makes no sense I just cant.
Dreams do come true

May you dance with your children
Let the world see your wholeness
Let the joys and sorrows make you strongergood wedding material

May your dreams interweave full of colour and beauty
Let love be the gentle breeze 
Let it cleanse and wash your soul
A little sleepy with all the grandiose images
May you honour and respect each other's individuality. 
May your love glisten and shine and glow to the skies.glisten, shine, AND glow?
Be proud, be brave, be strong with humility.
May you both become one

I think your party will love it.