01-05-2017, 03:39 PM
**Thanks in advance for reading my poem. This is to read out at a wedding in a couple of weeks. I have not written in years so constructive feedback very welcome!**
Today is a perfect day
When two hearts intertwine as they may
Tis’ the beginning of an everlasting journey
And the freedom of love shines its beauty
Standing in glorious oneness
Oh, thank the Lord for his greatness
For bringing perfect souls down a painted path
From creating life through to the aftermath
Unravelling every layer of the rose to the warmth of the sun
Caressing every cell, infusing with protection and serenity
Fresh dew touching the petals without fear of vulnerability
It is time to just be
Swirling through every colour of the rainbow
Drifting through clouds, being carried with godly hands down a waterfall
Moments without hope for more than what they already are
Dreams do come true
May you dance with your children
Let the world see your wholeness
Let the joys and sorrows make you stronger
May your dreams interweave full of colour and beauty
Let love be the gentle breeze
Let it cleanse and wash your soul
May you honour and respect each other's individuality.
May your love glisten and shine and glow to the skies.
Be proud, be brave, be strong with humility.
May you both become one
Today is a perfect day
When two hearts intertwine as they may
Tis’ the beginning of an everlasting journey
And the freedom of love shines its beauty
Standing in glorious oneness
Oh, thank the Lord for his greatness
For bringing perfect souls down a painted path
From creating life through to the aftermath
Unravelling every layer of the rose to the warmth of the sun
Caressing every cell, infusing with protection and serenity
Fresh dew touching the petals without fear of vulnerability
It is time to just be
Swirling through every colour of the rainbow
Drifting through clouds, being carried with godly hands down a waterfall
Moments without hope for more than what they already are
Dreams do come true
May you dance with your children
Let the world see your wholeness
Let the joys and sorrows make you stronger
May your dreams interweave full of colour and beauty
Let love be the gentle breeze
Let it cleanse and wash your soul
May you honour and respect each other's individuality.
May your love glisten and shine and glow to the skies.
Be proud, be brave, be strong with humility.
May you both become one
