World War 3

[rollingbrianjones]

I take in bits of this, and struggle with others intensely despite really trying.

I think the sonnet is lovely to read, but I get lost in places.

And before I would comment further, I am interested to know if you actually follow religion with genuine belief?
As overall, applying direct meaning and logic, the writing to me at its strongest suggests you don't. Yet so much of it seems to be written as if you do?
Whilst grabbing meaning here and there, without the answer to this question (which you may not wish to answer) it is confusing to me...

Please do try to remember that for serious critique, it is important not to confuse a poem with a diary entry.  What the poet does or does not believe is irrelevant/ mod