Devolution
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"Meter" and "syllabic verse" are two entirely differently things and certainly cannot be exchanged one for the other.

A syllable count does not give rhythm, whereas the whole point of meter is to impart rhythm to the line.

Tyger, Tyger, burning bright,
in the forest of the night     2 lines in trochee tetrameter   (16 syllables)

A horse ate oats by the wet well
anticipating the sunrise.     2 lines of syllabic verse (16 syllables)

As can be seen the only similarity is that there are 16 syllables.

Syllabic verse can have intermittent rhythm, which can make for a very good line.

The horse | ate his oats | by the well
seeing | the rising | of the sun.

BTW you left out the American revolution. Granted a a spurious premise, but still it rest upon a flimsy reed.

Best,

dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-05-2017, 03:23 AM
RE: Devolution - by Achebe - 01-05-2017, 05:19 AM
RE: Devolution - by QDeathstar - 01-05-2017, 07:18 AM
RE: Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-05-2017, 07:30 AM
RE: Devolution - by Erthona - 01-05-2017, 09:05 AM
RE: Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-05-2017, 10:15 AM
RE: Devolution - by rollingbrianjones - 01-05-2017, 11:29 AM
RE: Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-07-2017, 10:46 AM
RE: Devolution - by Achebe - 01-06-2017, 06:19 AM
RE: Devolution - by rollingbrianjones - 01-07-2017, 11:03 AM
RE: Devolution - by RiverNotch - 01-08-2017, 12:38 AM
RE: Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-08-2017, 06:40 AM
RE: Devolution - by billy - 01-08-2017, 08:34 AM
RE: Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-08-2017, 09:17 AM
RE: Devolution - by rollingbrianjones - 01-08-2017, 10:13 AM
RE: Devolution - by billy - 01-08-2017, 11:26 AM
RE: Devolution - by RiverNotch - 01-08-2017, 06:01 PM
RE: Devolution - by Achebe - 01-08-2017, 07:31 PM
RE: Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-08-2017, 08:45 PM
RE: Devolution - by rollingbrianjones - 01-12-2017, 11:54 AM
RE: Devolution - by Mark Cecil - 01-15-2017, 03:06 AM
RE: Devolution - by rollingbrianjones - 01-17-2017, 11:09 AM



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