The Alley Ends
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(12-30-2016, 01:43 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:  The Alley Ends 

with over run-
ning vines and loose debris from dec-
ades of decay and redirec-
ting energy sent, From the sun

and circling sky in-
habitants shift with the rains a-
bandoning their hunger pains, a-
nother says, 'to stay Is dyin''

though the final voy-
age? Hind sight's just as blind as fore-
sight.  Calculating ancient stor-
age, El Dorado's, Even Troy's

ruins had been un-
dition's are scholar's Opinions 

sway, cultural lend-
earthed, revealing nothing extra-
ordinary.  In context, tra-
ers walk the streets, between the buil-
dings.  Leave their thoughts with broken pill-
ars as they reach The alley's end.
I'm thinking the enjambment stuff is supposed to be a confusing alley.
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Messages In This Thread
The Alley Ends - by CRNDLSM - 12-30-2016, 01:43 AM
RE: The Alley Ends - by Brownlie - 12-31-2016, 03:25 AM
RE: The Alley Ends - by CRNDLSM - 12-31-2016, 03:36 AM
RE: The Alley Ends - by Brownlie - 12-31-2016, 03:44 AM
RE: The Alley Ends - by Lizzie - 12-31-2016, 09:23 AM



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