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[RiverNotch]

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Daylight stars 
A bit dodgy but better for sonics

I debated that word a fair bit. I was going to go with morning stars, but I think MorningStar is a brand name, and I didn't want to hassle with that.

I think the change would be an improvement, so it's been implemented. How dodgy???

morning stars would conjure up the image of a thousand Lucifers or Venuses for me -- yeah, it is sort of a brand name. not sure that would have been what you were going for, so i'm kinda glad you skirted that

also a thousand clubs. head-bash, not head-bang