soda springs
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yeah but will you do any edits on it?

it's as good as most poems i've read but i think it could improve a little.
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soda springs - by mikebauer - 01-10-2010, 01:28 PM
RE: soda springs - by billy - 01-10-2010, 01:45 PM
RE: soda springs - by mikebauer - 01-10-2010, 01:57 PM
RE: soda springs - by billy - 01-10-2010, 02:02 PM
RE: soda springs - by mikebauer - 01-11-2010, 04:07 AM
RE: soda springs - by billy - 01-11-2010, 10:19 AM
RE: soda springs - by mikebauer - 01-11-2010, 11:25 AM
RE: soda springs - by billy - 01-11-2010, 11:32 AM
RE: soda springs - by mikebauer - 01-11-2010, 11:45 AM
RE: soda springs - by billy - 01-11-2010, 12:27 PM
RE: soda springs - by mikebauer - 01-11-2010, 12:32 PM
RE: soda springs - by billy - 01-11-2010, 12:49 PM



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