Syllable count

[aschueler]

Americans always seem to have trouble with those r endings

... People who get upset that other people don't say things the same as them deserve to be provoked.

One of the best lines I have seen in a while.  If I had a tag line interest it would be that.

I think colloquialisms are just as apt IF the whole poem is consistent, especially if it's a native/local writing true.

However, most people probably dont agree with me.

In other words, let frail have two syllables if it fits with the accent and tone of everything else.