Babal

[tectak]

thanks for the feedback! i'll implement the capitalizations as soon as i am able, and i fully agree that section two needs reworking. just one thing: what do you mean by like, in the third section?

I meant I liked it...more for the compliance than the originality. We are always being encouraged to say things in a new way...sometimes it is just fine to say things in a way that conforms to the norm but has a "new"
 simple truth in it.
Best,
tectak