01-10-2010, 01:57 PM
thanks. it's, yes, coming down to dik, but the way to it is a trip through your history and attitude. the landscape of this poem is supposed to be this landscape where you get to know your body through the years, and maybe get to realize that it's not much good by itself, when it comes to these urge-to-merge things, and i'm way gay-scsi terminated and was i love with this guy and it didn't happen. so, it's, yah, everything's wonderful, the grand canyon, but what about him ?
but, really, it's about how fun it is to write a poem. i really liked writing this one, and i let it go and pulled it in and it found its ending when it needed it. the intuitive part was to bracket and bend the word 'dick', so that it didn't look like that thing that people use to rape with... just this part of my friend that was kind of compelling...
yes, i'm fucked, but so what.
but, really, it's about how fun it is to write a poem. i really liked writing this one, and i let it go and pulled it in and it found its ending when it needed it. the intuitive part was to bracket and bend the word 'dick', so that it didn't look like that thing that people use to rape with... just this part of my friend that was kind of compelling...
yes, i'm fucked, but so what.