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The Conscientious Mind
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12-14-2016, 12:13 PM
@ rowens i enjoyed it till the last line. the content of the last line didn't bother so much as it felt tacked on for the sake of something to tack on. i think i'm saying it was tacky
 oh and the cigar line was uber cliche but still worked well in getting across that you are who you are. as opposed to the last line
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The Conscientious Mind - by rowens - 12-14-2016, 06:20 AM
RE: The Conscientious Mind - by dukealien - 12-14-2016, 06:54 AM
RE: The Conscientious Mind - by billy - 12-14-2016, 12:09 PM
RE: The Conscientious Mind - by rowens - 12-14-2016, 07:29 AM
RE: The Conscientious Mind - by billy - 12-14-2016, 12:13 PM
RE: The Conscientious Mind - by rowens - 12-14-2016, 12:55 PM
RE: The Conscientious Mind - by billy - 12-14-2016, 01:51 PM
RE: The Conscientious Mind - by rowens - 12-14-2016, 02:22 PM
RE: The Conscientious Mind - by RiverNotch - 12-16-2016, 01:43 PM
RE: The Conscientious Mind - by billy - 12-14-2016, 04:23 PM
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