12-06-2016, 04:16 AM
I love the meaning of this poem (at least, what it means to me), I can relate to it very well. Very inspiring!
The only criticism I can give you is that the structure of your rhyming words seems off to me.
Sometimes the last word of a sentence rhymes with the last word of the next sentence, other times it skips a whole sentence before it rhymes.
But overall well done!
The only criticism I can give you is that the structure of your rhyming words seems off to me.
Sometimes the last word of a sentence rhymes with the last word of the next sentence, other times it skips a whole sentence before it rhymes.
But overall well done!