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Red Patent Shoes -- revision
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12-02-2016, 10:44 AM
(12-02-2016, 02:35 AM)Sparkydashforth Wrote: He draped his arms around her,Soooooo smug. So very smug. Thanks for your comments, Sparky. You raise some good points. I do overuse 'like' -- I'm working up the courage to use true metaphor. Thanks for the read. 
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Red Patent Shoes -- revision - by Lizzie - 08-21-2016, 03:09 AM
RE: Red Shoes - by next - 08-21-2016, 08:25 AM
RE: Red Shoes - by Alic Elliot - 08-21-2016, 06:46 PM
RE: Red Shoes - by cvanshelton - 08-22-2016, 08:54 AM
RE: Red Shoes - by Lizzie - 08-23-2016, 05:11 AM
RE: Red Shoes - by billy - 08-23-2016, 04:49 PM
RE: Red Shoes - by Lizzie - 08-23-2016, 05:35 PM
RE: Red Shoes - by 71degrees - 08-24-2016, 02:06 AM
RE: Red Shoes - by makeshift - 08-24-2016, 12:27 PM
RE: Red Shoes - by Lizzie - 08-24-2016, 03:18 PM
RE: Red Shoes - by 71degrees - 08-25-2016, 11:21 AM
RE: Red Shoes - by next - 08-26-2016, 01:19 PM
RE: Red Shoes - by homer1950 - 08-27-2016, 01:16 AM
RE: Red Shoes - by Lizzie - 08-27-2016, 05:49 PM
RE: Red Patent Shoes & The Depression Support Group -- revision - by Lizzie - 10-11-2016, 05:32 AM
RE: Red Patent Shoes -- revision - by Alic Elliot - 10-11-2016, 01:56 PM
RE: Red Patent Shoes -- revision - by Achebe - 10-11-2016, 08:36 PM
RE: Red Patent Shoes -- revision - by Lizzie - 10-12-2016, 07:35 AM
RE: Red Patent Shoes -- revision - by kolemath - 10-12-2016, 10:52 AM
RE: Red Patent Shoes -- revision - by Lizzie - 10-13-2016, 04:42 AM
RE: Red Patent Shoes -- revision - by Sparkydashforth - 12-02-2016, 02:35 AM
RE: Red Patent Shoes -- revision - by Lizzie - 12-02-2016, 10:44 AM
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