Once Upon A Wi-fi edit

[CRNDLSM]

Thanks kolemath!  terrorism is cliche, I changed it to terrorism thinking that all the stanzas have to do with death and cover up.  and terrorism would be the defining example, related back to the question at the end about two ships (which I thougot might be more cliche.)  as far as the private eye, I didn't think specifics mattered, almost make it ironic.  I see terrorism needs to be changed.  I'll figure it out!

i like the poem. it somehow connects old and new story telling.  I could use some clarification on a few images. 

Once upon a wi-fi,
I spied the whole world wide, effective inversion
terrorism every night. yeah terrorism is cliche. what does it look like? 
When the flames touched the sky,
bank accounts went dry, it seems to me they swelled. halliburton? I'm willing to clump in Halliburton with
windows opened, people tried to fly. this works

Once upon a wi-fi,
I spied a private eye
looking for an alibi.
His lonely wife sharpened the knife. i infer 'his' is not referring to the private eye? but that's the only other noun in the stanza.. how many ppl are referred to here? 1, an investigator 2&3 husband/wife?
Naive? sigh...
Another murder suicide. hyphenate these words

Once upon a wi-fi,
I spied a spirit guide
in the corner getting high.
Brains fried,
nowhere to hide,
all he was will be denied. not sure what this line adds..maybe i'm missing something

Once upon a wi-fi,
I spied two ships collide.
I'll never know why
everybody's gonna die. maybe gotta instead of gonna..that fits the murder theme better

thanks for posting