11-29-2016, 10:36 AM
Thanks again for all comments on this - had hoped it was one of my more direct and obvious writings but I see there are parts that can be improved in terms of providing clarity to the third party reader. Am work-shopping away, and will repost after taking into account some of the points above. Just this was very personal, and written for someone who upon reading certainly understood it- so am trying to work on making parts clearer to other readers. Working two jobs through December though, so little time for writing!
Thanks again- Lizzie, Zorcas and CRNDLSM, I am slowly improving it.
Thanks again- Lizzie, Zorcas and CRNDLSM, I am slowly improving it.

