Once Upon A Wi-fi edit

[kolemath]

i like the poem. it somehow connects old and new story telling.  I could use some clarification on a few images. 

Once upon a wi-fi,
I spied the whole world wide, effective inversion
terrorism every night. yeah terrorism is cliche. what does it look like?
When the flames touched the sky,
bank accounts went dry, it seems to me they swelled. halliburton?
windows opened, people tried to fly. this works

Once upon a wi-fi,
I spied a private eye
looking for an alibi.
His lonely wife sharpened the knife. i infer 'his' is not referring to the private eye? but that's the only other noun in the stanza.. how many ppl are referred to here? 1, an investigator 2&3 husband/wife?
Naive? sigh...
Another murder suicide. hyphenate these words

Once upon a wi-fi,
I spied a spirit guide
in the corner getting high.
Brains fried,
nowhere to hide,
all he was will be denied. not sure what this line adds..maybe i'm missing something

Once upon a wi-fi,
I spied two ships collide.
I'll never know why
everybody's gonna die. maybe gotta instead of gonna..that fits the murder theme better

thanks for posting