Dawning

[Wjames]

Beyond the gill, eponymous assemblies 
of worms begin their spiral dance. I'd never heard the word eponymous before, and after looking up the definition "of, relating to, or being the person or thing for whom or which something is named: of, relating to, or being an eponym", I don't think it fits here - are assemblies named after worms? 

Twilight slips from kneeling cattle.
A yawl of dew and stars
rolls sawyers of mist. I like this image, but again I don't know if "sawyers" is the right word, although it sounds nice.

Fungal soft, a prow of light rises
for sailing winds. I would move fungal soft to the end of the sentence: "A prow of light rises for sailing winds, fungal soft." It connects to the mossy earth section, and it describes the way they light raises for sailing winds.
Here where the mossy earth is mired
I also scud upon a goodly rot. Do you need "also"? Who else scuds upon goodly rot?

The moors are still moon-shod
Stump grass murmurs in a soft-lipped wind. Why is Stump capitalized? I would add an "and" before stump - the two images aren't really connected as is.

Beneath the rims and ruts pods crack open. I pause after ruts, maybe add a comma.
Baptizing gods emerge with the newborns,
pinchers clutch at sky-blind prayers. The ending is a little ambiguous, maybe try and add something to grab onto [b](newborn what? babies? mornings?. Who is making the sky-blind prayers?)[/b]

I enjoyed the morning scene, there's some nice imagery and sounds.