Gastronomic Wrinkles in a Porous Continuum

[Sparkydashforth]

Damn Leanne,

thanks for the thought on this. When I write mostly don't know what the hell I am doing,
so poor poetry or not, it's nice to see it acknowledged as a poem!

Appreciate the comment. ><

This is not a comment on the poem, but just a correction on a misconception -- this may be more prose-like than many poems here but it is clearly still poetry, particularly as the writer views it as such, and it is not so experimentally out-there that it can only find a home in miscellaneous.  It is a poem that can be, and has been, critiqued.

I would like to remind all members of this thread for those new to critique, or those who might do well to brush up on it, particularly this section:

Remember that this is not your writing. Ask yourself what the author wants to achieve and how best that goal can be met within the existing framework of the piece. Do not attempt to impose your own style on another writer; a good reviewer will in fact impose the writer’s style on him/herself for the duration of the critique.