Gastronomic Wrinkles in a Porous Continuum

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Okay Alic, general opinion seems to be that this is a poor excuse for a poem, and that it should be taken out
and mercifully shot.

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That's not true, I was hoping you'd sew like a syllable count per line thing, or introduce a pattern, bring out more of the art than the story
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It's a  prose-poem Crndlsm, It probably belongs in the Miscellaneous Forum - my mistake. labels and forms tend to push
writing into boxes.  It's not a poem by the rules of poetry.  I accept that --- shrug and move on.

Much thanks for the feedback.