Gastronomic Wrinkles in a Porous Continuum

[Sparkydashforth]

The idea is nice, like CRNDLSM said. My advice is take a creepier angle, instead of prose-ish description. Stanzas 3-5 can be scratched entirely.

Best, Alic

Okay Alic, general opinion seems to be that this is a poor excuse for a poem, and that it should be taken out
and mercifully shot.

I probably will salvage its bones one day when I dislike it as much as everyone else