11-22-2016, 05:33 AM
The mustang driver was the narrator right? Being hypocritical and all?
'Swimming in a Marlboro stack' - nice
'Niwhere neAr...' sounds rather long
'Nowhere to drop your ash, flick in the grass' might be better...?
Nice
'Swimming in a Marlboro stack' - nice
'Niwhere neAr...' sounds rather long
'Nowhere to drop your ash, flick in the grass' might be better...?
Nice
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe