Gastronomic Wrinkles in a Porous Continuum
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Thanks for taking a look CRNDLSM,

it does go on a bit.

Cheers.





(11-21-2016, 02:58 AM)CRNDLSM Wrote:  This is a really interesting idea. I started making a line by line, but got tired. I think you can do it a lititle less like a short story.  Honestly I was getting annoyed with all the not dissimilars. And after reading everything a couple times, I couldn't quite grasp the closing stanza. I was probably just tired.
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RE: Gastronomic Wrinkles in a Porous Continuum - by Sparkydashforth - 11-21-2016, 03:40 AM
RE: Gastronomic Wrinkles in a Porous Continuum - by just mercedes - 11-21-2016, 03:47 AM



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