11-21-2016, 02:58 AM
This is a really interesting idea. I started making a line by line, but got tired. I think you can do it a lititle less like a short story. Honestly I was getting annoyed with all the not dissimilars. And after reading everything a couple times, I couldn't quite grasp the closing stanza. I was probably just tired.
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