Me and you

[Achebe]

Me and you
 
I'd like to offer some advice,
but you're looking very nice;
I wouldn't want to offend
and bring the us
in my head
to an end.
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(non-gendered version)

I'd like to offer some advice,
but I'd not want to offend
and bring the us
in my head
to an end.
 
erthona
 
©2016

Would it be better with 'don't' instead of 'wouldn't' ?
Just fits the line better metre wise I think...
Nice