11-18-2016, 11:22 PM
Pithy and witty.
(11-18-2016, 08:22 PM)Erthona Wrote: Me and you
I'd like to offer some advice,
but you're looking very nice;.........do you need this line? It offers a gender relationship point of view, whereas the poem
could be read in a more general way.
I wouldn't want to offend
and bring the us,
in my head
to an end.
erthona
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