11-18-2016, 10:48 AM
(11-18-2016, 09:36 AM)Sparkydashforth Wrote: Like this Zorcas. I have a penchant for good instructional poems.Had you been a champagne cork trapped in that wire cage, you'd have been delighted to be free of it. As for the toweled decorking, removing it would have wiped out half the poem, and as for the noise of one untoweled, I prefer the more quiet entertainment of the ones drinking once the cork is gone--with inhibitions. Glad you liked it.
This one is focused and has a dry wit running through it.
I'm not sure if there is that much to admire in the 'wire cage' around the cork,
and I miss the exhilarating pop of a towel free lift off,
but nevertheless this quieter version works for me as well.

