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11-18-2016, 04:39 AM

(11-18-2016, 04:31 AM)Sparkydashforth Wrote: I wasn't around to follow the progression of this poem from the original post to its
latest incarnation, but that seems perfect to me. So this is not an edit,
more a round of applause.

Much appreciated although we try to keep straight applause out of the workshops. Smile

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You can redeem yourself by giving me an opinion of the current first line vs the one before it. Big Grin

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NICU, For Dominic Edit #2.1 - by ellajam - 01-22-2015, 04:50 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by Brownlie - 01-22-2015, 01:12 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by Erthona - 01-22-2015, 01:41 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by bena - 01-22-2015, 11:18 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-23-2015, 12:14 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ChristopherSea - 01-23-2015, 02:17 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-23-2015, 02:53 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by milo - 01-23-2015, 10:44 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by Erthona - 01-23-2015, 10:55 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-24-2015, 09:50 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by milo - 01-25-2015, 01:20 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-25-2015, 02:12 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by bena - 01-25-2015, 02:18 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-25-2015, 02:43 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by milo - 01-25-2015, 02:59 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-25-2015, 04:03 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by RiverNotch - 01-25-2015, 11:33 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-25-2015, 12:16 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by Erthona - 01-25-2015, 03:54 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by RiverNotch - 01-25-2015, 06:34 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-25-2015, 09:17 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by Erthona - 01-25-2015, 10:12 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-25-2015, 10:35 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by milo - 01-26-2015, 02:29 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by RiverNotch - 01-25-2015, 10:33 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-26-2015, 08:02 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by milo - 01-28-2015, 02:41 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-28-2015, 03:01 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by milo - 01-28-2015, 04:13 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by bena - 01-27-2015, 11:56 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-28-2015, 12:47 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by Leah S. - 01-30-2015, 03:56 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic - by ellajam - 01-31-2015, 10:39 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by ellajam - 05-21-2015, 03:46 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by Todd - 05-28-2015, 04:11 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by ellajam - 05-28-2015, 04:19 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by Animal Riots Activist - 05-28-2015, 06:13 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by ellajam - 05-28-2015, 08:46 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by RiverNotch - 05-28-2015, 12:43 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by ellajam - 05-28-2015, 10:22 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by Animal Riots Activist - 05-29-2015, 02:58 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by tectak - 05-30-2015, 10:37 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by ellajam - 05-30-2015, 11:10 PM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by Municipal Alchemist - 06-03-2015, 03:18 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by ellajam - 06-03-2015, 04:53 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #1 - by Municipal Alchemist - 06-03-2015, 09:35 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #2 - by ellajam - 06-20-2015, 01:57 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #2 - by Todd - 06-20-2015, 03:12 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #2 - by ellajam - 06-20-2015, 03:32 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #2 - by Mark A Becker - 06-20-2015, 04:05 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #2 - by ellajam - 06-20-2015, 04:22 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #2.1 - by MHenry - 11-07-2016, 09:04 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #2.1 - by ellajam - 11-07-2016, 10:26 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #2.1 - by Sparkydashforth - 11-18-2016, 04:31 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #2.1 - by ellajam - 11-18-2016, 04:39 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #2.1 - by kolemath - 11-18-2016, 06:15 AM

RE: NICU, For Dominic Edit #2.1 - by ellajam - 11-18-2016, 09:48 PM

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