The Amputee

[Wjames]

Thanks for your thoughts people.

The eyes of the stranger was supposed to represent people staring at the missing limb (the vaccum), I've changed it to stare, hopefully that clarifies it a bit. I see how that connection wasn't strong enough - tingle, etc aren't really relevant, only the lingering was the comparison.

I'd appreciate more thoughts here, I might try to add to this one.