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Shaken awake
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11-14-2016, 06:40 AM
Can't have been a good night for sleeping Mercedes -- though this is a very peaceful-sounding poem. I enjoy the way you've built in several layers of meaning, so that the quake (which was pretty damn literal) becomes a metaphor for change, for dreams interrupted.
It could be worse
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Shaken awake - by just mercedes - 11-14-2016, 01:00 AM
RE: Shaken awake - by Leanne - 11-14-2016, 06:40 AM
RE: Shaken awake - by just mercedes - 11-14-2016, 06:59 AM
RE: Shaken awake - by Achebe - 11-15-2016, 08:03 AM
RE: Shaken awake - by just mercedes - 11-15-2016, 08:28 AM
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