Unraveling
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A simple word shatters:
a thousand lost connections,

the tightly twisted knots untangle.
 
The mumbled mice of mind
Skitter scamper squeak in brash commotion
Drowning out sound notions
 
Three six five, just letters:
The meaning as fallible as the mind
That promised to hold on to it.

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A simple word shatters at the thought
of a million of lost connections

A million tightly twisted knots unravel
 
The unintelligible mice of mind
Skitter scamper squeak
in overpowering commotion,

Drowning out your own name
 
Waiting for the day when numbers
order the way they're ordered to
Three six five, just letters,
The meaning as fragile
As the fallibility of the mind
That promised to hold on to it
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Unraveling - by starlight - 11-09-2016, 10:32 AM
RE: Unraveling - by sintas patatas - 11-09-2016, 05:22 PM
RE: Unraveling - by abhishek - 11-10-2016, 04:38 AM
RE: Unraveling - by Quixilated - 11-10-2016, 10:12 AM
RE: Unraveling - by Jo Frumple - 11-11-2016, 06:56 AM
RE: Unraveling - by Mark Cecil - 11-13-2016, 07:40 AM
RE: Unraveling - by Coquette16 - 11-14-2016, 03:19 AM
RE: Unraveling - by Sparkydashforth - 11-16-2016, 12:07 AM
RE: Unraveling - by starlight - 11-27-2016, 12:40 PM
RE: Unraveling - by Sparkydashforth - 11-28-2016, 01:27 AM
RE: Unraveling - by HaleINthewind - 11-30-2016, 03:26 PM



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