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Babal
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I realize this isn't a complete critique by any means but don't you mean Babylon in line 1? Babalon I'm told (by Google) is a Crowley goddess in his writings I assume you're referring though to the nation. I'm reading through this now and will attempt a full critique later.
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Babal - by RiverNotch - 11-05-2016, 02:07 AM
RE: Soulmate (retitled, from "Babal") - by Lizzie - 11-06-2016, 02:09 AM
RE: Soulmate (retitled, from "Babal") - by RiverNotch - 11-06-2016, 02:49 PM
RE: Soulmate (retitled, from "Babal") - by Lizzie - 11-06-2016, 02:55 PM
RE: Soulmate - by RiverNotch - 11-09-2016, 12:36 AM
RE: Soulmate - by Quixilated - 11-09-2016, 12:52 AM
RE: Soulmate - by Todd - 11-09-2016, 01:12 AM
RE: Soulmate - by RiverNotch - 11-09-2016, 01:49 AM
RE: Soulmate - by Todd - 11-09-2016, 03:51 AM
RE: Soulmate - by Todd - 11-09-2016, 06:27 AM
RE: Soulmate - by RiverNotch - 11-09-2016, 02:01 PM
RE: Babal - by RiverNotch - 11-16-2016, 05:24 PM
RE: Babal - by RiverNotch - 11-19-2016, 07:40 PM
RE: Babal - by RiverNotch - 12-13-2016, 07:35 PM
RE: Babal - by RiverNotch - 12-14-2016, 06:19 PM
RE: Babal - by Sparkydashforth - 12-20-2016, 03:53 PM
RE: Babal - by RiverNotch - 12-22-2016, 08:37 PM
RE: Babal - by Sparkydashforth - 12-22-2016, 11:45 PM
RE: Babal - by RiverNotch - 12-27-2016, 11:53 PM
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