11-08-2016, 06:26 AM
(11-07-2016, 10:04 PM)Pdeathstar Wrote: I think putting a pinup model inside the men's bathroom or similar paints a stronger picture than behind a corner store. I walk behind 7-11 all the time and there's nothing back there but trash.Aha. Now the confusion clears. I wasn't thinking a pinup poster, I was intending to refer to an incidence of sexual assault. Hence my startled response.
That's a relief.

It does help. Thank you very much, Todd. I will certainly give that stanza that feels bolted on some attention. I see what you're saying about it being too telly. That was the last bit to get written, so I was probably rushing it.

