11-07-2016, 10:26 AM
Thanks so much for reading and commenting, MHenry. I'll take a look at that first line again, it's my most recent edit when someone told me "we wait" was weak and I may have screwed up.
I have a more recent one that I won't point you to because I have plenty of great crit on in and got halfway through an edit then stalled. Maybe this will push me to get it done so you'll have something fresh to crit.
Oh, and if you click on a user name you go to their profile and can click on a list of their threads or posts, same with your own.
Aaand, putting on my mod hat, it's a good thing you had that quibble or it would have been better as a PM, in this forum we ask for a thorough critique. You'll get the hang of it, just read the guidelines for each forum.
I have a more recent one that I won't point you to because I have plenty of great crit on in and got halfway through an edit then stalled. Maybe this will push me to get it done so you'll have something fresh to crit.
Oh, and if you click on a user name you go to their profile and can click on a list of their threads or posts, same with your own.
Aaand, putting on my mod hat, it's a good thing you had that quibble or it would have been better as a PM, in this forum we ask for a thorough critique. You'll get the hang of it, just read the guidelines for each forum.
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