Charlie
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I like this too, Crundle. What makes it a dynamic piece for me is the honesty of "You know I hate you" then contrasted with "it must have been just you and me in the end." These kinds of conflicting feelings make up our most important relationships -- that's what makes it ring true.
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Charlie - by CRNDLSM - 11-05-2016, 05:10 AM
RE: Charlie - by Achebe - 11-05-2016, 02:05 PM
RE: Charlie - by Mark Cecil - 11-06-2016, 03:49 AM
RE: Charlie - by Lizzie - 11-07-2016, 07:20 AM



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