Babal

[Lizzie]

RiverNotch: this piece is very dense, and I'd love to give it a proper critique sometime if you felt like putting it in the workshop.

At the very least, please remind me of what plato said about women/children?

Ideally, Plato wasn't sexist, but when discussing things practically, he may have been swayed by the tide -- Ancient Athens treated women essentially as baby-making children, depriving them of the citizenry and cloistering them, post-natum, with the loom. http://www.classicsnetwork.com/essays/th...to-and/786

And as for putting it in a workshop, I was planning to do that after receiving a few more responses in here, with regards to whether it's even readable. Thanks for reading!

Haha, readable? No, but only because I'm an illiterate. I had to google every other word. But, they're great words -- they're the best words. Far better than Donald's words (Trump, not Q).