11-05-2016, 02:05 PM
hmmm....I actually liked this one. there is something pretty genuine about S2. I love it.
I think if you give up the unnecessary dark / spark / park and friend / end in S3, the poem will read even better.
I think if you give up the unnecessary dark / spark / park and friend / end in S3, the poem will read even better.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe