Babal
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Babal

for Kim

1. Mother Earth

-- Babylon stole her architects
from Egypt, her engineers from Greece, her doctors
and priests from Israel: that is why our tongues
are tied with Şibboleths. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, and Plato,
Plotinus, Valentinus, lied to us. They promised us
angels for wives, mortal gods for husbands, yet all we got
were grave old men, anxious Jocastas.

2. Grave Old Men

--my mother
and father plagued me
when they raised me.
Or rather blessed:

the knowledge of old age
confused youth's understanding. 
Yet have I grown enough to shave 
this hircine curse's shape

into a Spanish beard? Galleons sail
on Pacific currents concretized
across Katipunan Avenue
between my Philippines and your Mexico. 

3. Mexico

-- what a Şibboleth! Our old school's shattered stones
are now the home to snake-like trumpet vines, just as your English
is no longer the same as mine, and your Bible grows 
overshorn, incomplete. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, so that when Lucifer
confused his craving for a love, he was cast down
to diabetic hell. The King and Queen of Corinth
were far from old when they raised me,

Teiresias the sex-changing cataract no man
but child: Plato did speak truth
when he said fleshly woman is a child.
Dare I subscribe? You know how tragedy works:

I am become an Indio Abelard,
grafted to cursed flesh, to shattered stone,
and you remain afloat, a child of God,
a blinding angel, mute and genderless.

4. Hermaphrodite

-- what a devilish love! It was no storm
but flesh-dissolving bile that broke
the Tower of Babel, that spread
(like pâté) men across the earth.

Fourth workshop edit:
Babal

for Kim

1. Mother Earth

-- Babylon stole her architects
from Egypt, her engineers from Greece, her doctors
and priests from Israel: that is why our tongues
are tied with Şibboleths. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, and Plato,
Plotinus, Valentinus, lied to us. They promised us
angels for wives, mortal gods for husbands, yet all we got
were grave old men, anxious Jocastas.

2. Grave Old Men

--my mother
and my father plagued me
when they raised me.
Or rather blessed,

how the knowledge of old age
confused youth's understanding. 
Yet have I grown enough to shave 
this hircine curse's shape

into a Spanish beard? Galleons sail
on pacific currents concretized
across Katipunan Avenue
between my Philippines and your Mexico. 

3. Mexico

-- what a Şibboleth! Our old school's shattered stones
are now the home to snake-like trumpet vines, just as your English
is no longer the same as mine, and your Bible grows 
overshorn, incomplete. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, so that when Lucifer
confused his craving for a love, he was cast down
to diabetic hell. The King and Queen of Corinth
were far from old when they raised me,

Teiresias the sex-changing cataract no man
but child: Plato did speak truth
when he said fleshly woman is a child.
Dare I subscribe? You know how tragedy works:

I am become an Indio Abelard,
grafted to cursed flesh, to shattered stone,
and you remain afloat, a child of God,
a blinding angel, mute and genderless.

4. Hermaphrodite

-- what a devilish love! It was no storm
but flesh-dissolving bile that broke
the Tower of Babel, that spread 
like pâté men across the earth.

Third workshop edit:
Babal

for Kim

1. Mother Earth

-- Babylon stole her architects
from Egypt, her engineers from Greece, her doctors
and priests from Israel: that is why our tongues
are tied with Şibboleths. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, and Plato,
Plotinus, Valentinus, lied to us. They promised us
angels for wives, mortal gods for husbands, yet all we got
were grave old men, anxious Jocastas.

2. Grave Old Men

-- my mother
and my father plagued me
as they raised me. Or rather blessed,
how the knowledge of old age

confused youth's understanding. Yet have I grown
enough to soothe these calluses born of school
with balm, that I should judge? to shave 
this hircine curse's shape

into a Spanish beard? Galleons sail
on pacific currents concretized
across Katipunan avenue
between my Philippines and your Mexico. 

3. Mexico

-- what a Şibboleth! Our old school's shattered stones
are now the home to snake-like trumpet vines, just as your English
is no longer the same as mine, and your Bible grows 
overshorn, incomplete. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, so when Lucifer
confused his craving for love, he was cast down
to diabetic hell, his eye blinded,
his leg severed, yet by the doctor's hand

his consoling treats tied shut. Ozy and Millie
were far from old when they raised me,
Dana their "God-hated" maker no man
but child: Plato did speak truth

when he said woman is a child. And yet,
accursed flesh, am I a woman who here stands,
as she with the ruddy hair is man
and you with the mortal light is genderless?

4. Hermaphrodite

-- what a devilish love! It was no storm
but flesh-dissolving bile that broke
the Tower of Babel, that spread 
like pâté men across the earth.

"...Katipunan avenue" - A tale of two universities in Quezon City, with the state-sponsored University of the Philippines to the west, and the Jesuit-sponsored Ateneo de Manila University to the east. The road itself is a haven to capitalists, with expensive malls, expensive restaurants, and expensive dormitories lining each side. 
"...Ozy and Millie" - http://ozyandmillie.org/ One of my favorite comic strips. Its creator is Dana Claire Simpson, and she is a transgender female. It was through that work that I learned what transgender means, though not directly, as I remember it never dealt with the issue -- I just did my research, once I got engrossed.

Second workshop edit:
Babal

for Kim

1 - Mother Earth
-- Babalon stole her architects
from Egypt, her engineers from Greece, her doctors
and priests from Israel: that is why our tongues
are tied with Şibboleths. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, and Plato,
Plotinus, Valentinus, lied to us. They promised us
angels for wives, mortal gods for husbands, yet all we got
were grave old men, anxious Jocastas.

2 - Grave Old Men
-- my mother
and my father plagued me
as they raised me. Or rather blessed,
the fact that the knowledge of old age

could coexist with the understanding of childhood
confused me, in my youth. Yet have I grown
enough to soothe my student's calluses
with balm, to shave this hircine curse

into a Spanish beard? Galleons sail
on pacific currents concretized
across Katipunan avenue
to and fro two colonies, my country and your Mexico. 

3 - Mexico
-- what a Şibboleth! Our old school's shattered stones
are now the home to snake-like trumpet vines, just as your English
is no longer the same as mine, and your Bible grows 
overshorn, incomplete. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, so when Lucifer
confused his craving for love, he was cast down
to diabetic hell, his eye blinded,
his leg severed, yet by the doctor's hand

his consoling treats tied shut. Ozy and Millie
were far from old when they raised me,
Dana their "God-hated" maker no man
but child: Plato did speak truth

when he said woman is a child. And yet,
accursed flesh, am I a woman who here stands,
as she with the ruddy hair is man
and you with the mortal light is genderless?

4 - Hermaphrodite
-- what a devilish love! It was no storm
but flesh-dissolving bile that broke
the Thoor of Babel, spread 
like pâté men across the earth.

"...Katipunan avenue" - A tale of two universities in Quezon City, with the state-sponsored University of the Philippines to the west, and the Jesuit-sponsored Ateneo de Manila University to the east. The road itself is a haven to capitalists, with expensive malls, expensive restaurants, and expensive dormitories lining each side. 
"...Ozy and Millie" - http://ozyandmillie.org/ One of my favorite comic strips. Its creator is Dana Claire Simpson, and she is a transgender female. It was through that work that I learned what transgender means, though not directly, as I remember it never dealt with the issue -- I just did my research, once I got engrossed.

First workshop edit:
Soulmate

for Kim

1 - Mother Earth
-- Babalon stole her architects
from Egypt, her engineers from Greece, her doctors
and priests from Israel: that is why our tongues
are tied with Şibboleths. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, and Plato,
Plotinus, Valentinus, lied to us. They promised us
angels for wives, mortal gods for husbands, yet all we got
were grave old men, anxious Jocastas.

2 - Grave Old Men
-- my mother
and my father plagued me
as they raised me. Or rather blessed,
the fact that the knowledge of old age

could coexist with the understanding of childhood
confused me, in my youth. Yet have I grown
enough to soothe my student's calluses
with balm, to shave this hircine curse

into a Spanish beard? Galleons sail
on pacific currents concretized
across Katipunan avenue
to and fro two colonies, my country and your Mexico. 

3 - Mexico
-- what a Şibboleth! Our old school's shattered stones
are now the home to snake-like trumpet vines, just as your English
is no longer the same as mine, and your Bible grows 
overshorn, incomplete. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, so that when Lucifer
confused his craving for a love, he was cast down
to diabetic hell, his eye blinded,
his leg severed, yet by the Jewish doctor's hand

his consoling treats tied shut. Ozy and Millie
were far from old when they raised me,
Dana their "God-hated" maker no man
but child: Plato did speak truth

when he said woman is a child. And yet,
accursed flesh, am I a woman who here stands,
as she with the ruddy hair is man
and you with the mortal light is genderless?

4 - Hermaphrodite
-- what a devilish love! It was no storm
but flesh-dissolving bile that broke
the Thoor of Babel, spread 
like pâté men across the earth.

"...Katipunan avenue" - A tale of two universities in Quezon City, with the state-sponsored University of the Philippines to the west, and the Jesuit-sponsored Ateneo de Manila University to the east. The road itself is a haven to capitalists, with expensive malls, expensive restaurants, and expensive dormitories lining each side. 
"...Ozy and Millie" - http://ozyandmillie.org/ One of my favorite comic strips. Its creator is Dana Claire Simpson, and she is a transgender female. It was through that work that I learned what transgender means, though not directly, as I remember it never dealt with the issue -- I just did my research, once I got engrossed.[pre verse]

Earlier drafts, with the corresponding edits having been cosmetic.
[pre verse]Soulmate

for Kim

1 - Mother Earth
-- Babalon stole her architects
from Egypt, her engineers from Greece, her doctors
and priests from Israel: that is why our tongues
are tied with Şibboleths. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, and Plato,
Plotinus, Valentinus, lied to us. They promised us
angels for wives, mortal gods for husbands, yet all we got
were grave old men, anxious Jocastas.

2 - Grave Old Men
-- my mother
and my father plagued me
as they raised me. Or rather blessed,
the fact that the knowledge of old age

could coexist with the understanding of childhood
confused me, in my youth. Yet have I grown
enough to soothe my student's calluses
with balm, to shave this hircine curse

into a Spanish beard? Galleons sail
on pacific currents concretized
across Katipunan avenue 1
to and fro two colonies, my country and your Mexico. 

3 - Mexico
-- what a Şibboleth! Our old school's shattered stones
are now the home to snake-like trumpet vines, just as your English
is no longer the same as mine, and your Bible
grows overshorn, incomplete. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, so that when Lucifer
confused his craving for a love, he was cast down
to diabetic hell, his eye blinded,
his leg severed, yet by the Jewish doctor's hand

his consoling treats tied shut. Ozy and Millie 2
were far from old when they raised me,
Dana their "God-hated" maker no man
but child: Plato did speak truth

when he said woman is a child. And yet,
accursed flesh, am I a woman who here stands,
as she with the ruddy hair is man
and you with the mortal light is genderless?

4 - Hermaphrodite
-- what a devilish love! It was no storm
but flesh-dissolving bile that broke
the Thoor of Babel, that spread 
like pâté men across the earth.

1 - A tale of two universities in Quezon City, with the state-sponsored University of the Philippines to the west, and the Jesuit-sponsored Ateneo de Manila University to the east. The road itself is a haven to capitalists, with expensive malls, expensive restaurants, and expensive dormitories lining each side. 
2http://ozyandmillie.org/ One of my favorite comic strips. Its creator is Dana Claire Simpson, and she is a transgender female. It was through that work that I learned what transgender means, though not directly, as I remember it never dealt with the issue -- I just did my research, once I got engrossed.

Babal

for Kim

1 - Mother Earth
-- Babalon stole her architects
from Egypt, her engineers from Greece, her doctors
and priests from Israel: that is why our tongues
are tied with Şibboleths. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, and Plato,
Plotinus, Valentinus, lied to us. They promised us
angels for wives, mortal gods for husbands, yet all we got
were grave old men, anxious Jocastas.

2 - Grave Old Men
-- my mother
and my father plagued me
as they raised me. Or rather blessed,
the fact that the knowledge of old age

coexisted with the understanding of childhood
confused me, in my youth. Yet have I grown
enough to soothe my student's calluses
with balm? To shave this hircine curse's shape

into a Spanish beard? Galleons sail
on pacific currents concretized
across Katipunan avenue 1
to and fro two colonies, my country and your Mexico. 

3 - Mexico
-- what a Şibboleth! Our old school's shattered stones
are now the home to snake-like trumpet vines, just as your English
is no longer the same as mine, and your Bible
grows overshorn, incomplete. Truly, meat

is the sweetest sin, so that when Lucifer
confused his craving for a love, he was cast down
to diabetic hell, his eye blinded,
his leg severed, yet by the Jewish doctor's hand

his consoling treats tied shut. Ozy and Millie 2
were far from old when they raised me,
Dana their God-hated maker not a man
but a child: Plato did speak truth

when he said woman is a child. And yet,
accursed flesh, am I a woman who here stands,
as she with the ruddy hair is man
and you with the mortal light is genderless?

4 - Hermaphrodite
-- what a devilish love! It was no storm
but flesh-dissolving bile that broke
the Thoor of Babel, that spread 
like pâté men across the earth.

1 - A tale of two universities in Quezon City, with the state-sponsored University of the Philippines to the west, and the Jesuit-sponsored Ateneo de Manila University to the east. The road itself is a haven to capitalists, with expensive malls, expensive restaurants, and expensive dormitories lining each side. 
2 - http://ozyandmillie.org/ One of my favorite comic strips. Its creator is Dana Claire Simpson, and she is a transgender female. It was through that work that I learned what transgender means, though not directly, as I remember it never dealt with the issue -- I just did my research, once I got engrossed.
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Babal - by RiverNotch - 11-05-2016, 02:07 AM
RE: Soulmate (retitled, from "Babal") - by Lizzie - 11-06-2016, 02:09 AM
RE: Soulmate (retitled, from "Babal") - by Lizzie - 11-06-2016, 02:55 PM
RE: Soulmate - by RiverNotch - 11-09-2016, 12:36 AM
RE: Soulmate - by Quixilated - 11-09-2016, 12:52 AM
RE: Soulmate - by Todd - 11-09-2016, 01:12 AM
RE: Soulmate - by RiverNotch - 11-09-2016, 01:49 AM
RE: Soulmate - by Todd - 11-09-2016, 03:51 AM
RE: Soulmate - by Todd - 11-09-2016, 06:27 AM
RE: Soulmate - by RiverNotch - 11-09-2016, 02:01 PM
RE: Babal - by Lizzie - 11-14-2016, 06:21 AM
RE: Babal - by RiverNotch - 11-16-2016, 05:24 PM
RE: Babal - by Achebe - 11-17-2016, 01:07 AM
RE: Babal - by RiverNotch - 11-19-2016, 07:40 PM
RE: Babal - by RiverNotch - 12-13-2016, 07:35 PM
RE: Babal - by tectak - 12-13-2016, 09:12 PM
RE: Babal - by RiverNotch - 12-14-2016, 06:19 PM
RE: Babal - by tectak - 12-20-2016, 06:24 AM
RE: Babal - by Sparkydashforth - 12-20-2016, 03:53 PM
RE: Babal - by RiverNotch - 12-22-2016, 08:37 PM
RE: Babal - by Sparkydashforth - 12-22-2016, 11:45 PM
RE: Babal - by Leanne - 12-23-2016, 06:17 AM
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