CREATING A POEM

CREATING A POEM

Keith

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11-05-2016, 12:04 AM

Zorcas
I added some line by line comments to my initial response to your poem, I look forward to seeing where you take this in the edit.
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CREATING A POEM - by zorcas - 10-19-2016, 10:20 AM

RE: CREATING A POEM - by Keith - 11-04-2016, 06:13 AM

RE: CREATING A POEM - by just mercedes - 11-04-2016, 06:38 AM

RE: CREATING A POEM - by Achebe - 11-04-2016, 07:38 AM

RE: CREATING A POEM - by billy - 11-04-2016, 10:14 AM

RE: CREATING A POEM - by Lizzie - 11-04-2016, 10:40 AM

RE: CREATING A POEM - by Keith - 11-05-2016, 12:04 AM

RE: CREATING A POEM - by tectak - 11-07-2016, 12:06 AM

RE: CREATING A POEM - by Ton Romus - 11-07-2016, 01:13 AM

RE: CREATING A POEM - by zorcas - 11-11-2016, 01:57 PM

RE: CREATING A POEM - by Erthona - 11-16-2016, 08:55 AM

RE: CREATING A POEM - by zorcas - 11-16-2016, 10:17 AM

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