11-04-2016, 07:06 PM
I'm enjoying the change in energy from the top to the bottom, there's a transfer of energy between the busy reflex and the human discontent that seems less bitter for the realization that it can change with the day that makes each section better for interacting with the other. Interesting work. 
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