11-04-2016, 07:38 AM
Hi zorcas -everything from "meow" onwards is predictable.
If you were say talking about a cat in the poem and then suddenly transformed to your real life cat,it might make for a more arresting device. As it stands, it's just a lame joke.
If you were say talking about a cat in the poem and then suddenly transformed to your real life cat,it might make for a more arresting device. As it stands, it's just a lame joke.
~ I think I just quoted myself - Achebe