11-04-2016, 03:55 AM
(11-04-2016, 02:10 AM)kolemath Wrote: Say SomethingI kole! I really like this except that one line. I wouldn't try to define the empty space at all. I hate the word 'purity' in any context except in the chemistry lab.
I wrote a verse
then erased it.
Here it is.
Do you like it?
The silence? The purity of space?
The blather doesn't blah-blah
the space of what you say.
It seems to be poking a little bit of fun at the self-centeredness of the reader. Of us all, really.

