Knuckle Sandwiches and White Rice

[Krakus]

You have a nice flow going on throughout the poem and I like the way you have some random rhyming throughout which makes the poem a joy to read e.g.

Were you ashamed that you couldn't get away and find something more? Were you keeping score? Counting all the times he turned off the lights and called you a whore?

Thanks Mark! It's great to me that you enjoyed the rhyming, because I was worried about it. I always feel like I run the risk of sounding ignorant if I use simple rhymes.

I'm curious though, how did the attitude of it feel when you read it? I was shooting for blunt and angry, but one of my other concerns was that I might come across as being too angsty or whiny.