Brimful [edit]
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Brimful

An old man minces ~
bears life like a brimming bowl
of harvest liquor.



original version;

Brimful (Senryu)


Old man walks as if
he carries well-aged brandy
in brimming chalice.
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Brimful [edit] - by dukealien - 11-01-2016, 10:32 PM
RE: Brimful (Senryu) - by kolemath - 11-02-2016, 07:25 AM
RE: Brimful (Senryu) - by RiverNotch - 11-02-2016, 01:36 PM
RE: Brimful (Senryu) - by dukealien - 11-02-2016, 11:27 PM
RE: Brimful (Senryu) - by kolemath - 11-02-2016, 11:39 PM
RE: Brimful (Senryu) - by RiverNotch - 11-02-2016, 11:50 PM
RE: Brimful [edit] - by dukealien - 11-03-2016, 10:26 PM
RE: Brimful [edit] - by kolemath - 11-04-2016, 01:47 AM



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