10-31-2016, 10:09 PM
(10-31-2016, 11:34 AM)Bueller Wrote:you can crit it all you like. apart from Todd's kind words, i am not sure what it is, really. it is a stream of consciousness thing. . . but, i barely structured it, so it it more like automatic writing with a few linking ideas. but critique away.(10-29-2016, 07:09 AM)shemthepenman Wrote:Heaven spare all the beautiful officers and the ugly ones too. The corrupt ones, however, can go immediately to hell.(10-29-2016, 06:54 AM)rowens Wrote: I've never driven a vehicle. And I live in the redneck south. My whole town is a driveway, and I'm the only one over 16 and not in a wheelchair who has never driven a car. So, I don't know how it feels.yeah, well it sucks. indescribable suckage. i wish i were dead. no. i wish the fucking copper that stopped me was dead. and his family. and everyone he knows. although, the lady police officer was had the perfect nose and was really smart and talked about waiting for godot and how she had studied drama. the gods can spare her.
Are you looking for crit on this?
