October Burns

[kolemath]

@Kolemath Past participles were the intent. I love participles, and often use them subtly. Forgot the commas, however. (Might be a bad habit from translating out of Latin - my teacher instructed us not to use commas for some participles, even though it often seemed necessary.) I'll adjust that here. On a side note, don't let the narrow city streets make you think trees are out of the question. Granted, the boulevard was the destination of the sunlight, and where the driving scene should begin. Brooklyn has quite a number of trees as well, and those are usually some pretty tight streets.

true enough. a tree grows in brooklyn, smith reminds us.  a little clarification wouldn't hurt though, a sidewalk tree perhaps? or say brooklyn? it was too much of a jump for me from a city to a tree, but i live in a tree-less city, so there's some personal bias there